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Aaron Martinez's avatar

The second half was as wild as the first! Really enjoyed this. Like a Barkeresque ritual but metal…

LC Douglass's avatar

Whiplash writing!

Dave Granger's avatar

Wow! That was a fucking trip! Stunning imagery. Great 👍

Alexander Marlow's avatar

Thanks for your comment LC. Yeah, it seemed appropriate. To ride the beast. Best wishes

Alexander Marlow's avatar

Cheers Dave, yeah I went a bit nuts for a while. Everything and the kitchen sink

Aaron Martinez's avatar

The second half was as wild as the first! Really enjoyed this. Like a Barkeresque ritual but metal…

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Alexander Marlow's avatar

Well it was written as a final part and it's pretty conclusive, BUT it could actually be fun to take it even further. Into an Astral plane and maybe follow a new character back in the real world. Thanks for putting that idea in my head. It could be a lot of fun.